Post by insanityxonxhigh on Aug 22, 2009 19:17:59 GMT -5
I wrote this in eighth grade, please tell me what you think of it. Oh by the way it is a mafia story I plan to put the rest of the chapters in my quizilla account.
Chapter one
(Third person POV)
The sun glared off the hood of a 90' mustang that was sitting in front of Dave's Music Store. Inside sat a petite girl, she has light brown skin and her hair was dark brown and fell just a bit below her shoulders and had straight bangs that fell just above her eyes. She appeared to be 5'3 and was sitting behind the checkout counter boredly flipping through a random music magazine that sat in front of her.
From a door in the back of the store came a girl who seemed to be 5'2, extremely pale skin and had dark blond hair with rainbow stripes in it, which fell to about an inch above her shoulders.
"Yo, I cant find the box of new Cd's that just came in. Do you know where they are Alura?"The blond asked.
"Um, Yea I think that it is over near the back of the store Destiny." Alura made a vague hand motion towards the back of the store.
(Alura's POV)
When is this day going to end. I laid my head down on the counter and closed my eyes. I could hear the scuffling from Dez's little search behind me. After what seemed like hours I heard a bell jingle signaling that some had enter the store.
Thinking that like any other person they would just look around the aisle for awhile, boy was I was I wrong.
"Excuse me?" said a voice with a distinct Russian accent, it was definitely a males voice.
I slowly lifted my head up and saw the hottest guy I had ever seen....well not the hottest guy, no one could compete with Ryan Ross I'm totally love him. But anyways back to the hot guy in front of me. He looked to be about 6'1 to 6'3, dark black hair with even darker blue eyes, he had lightly tanned skin with what appeared to be a nicely toned out body beneath a black shirt.
"Hi! How can I help you?" rang Dez's voice behind me, thank god she said something or else I would be staring at him like a complete idiot.
"Yes, can you give me directions to Кровавое прошлое Mansion?"
"Sure! Hey Alura isn't that right by where you live, and what do you know your shift is up!" I immediately knew what Dez was up to.
Ever since we met in 6th grade she has been trying to set me up with almost every guy we meet.
I let out a sigh and said "Yea, it is, if you would like you could follow me in your car."
"Sure." I got up and grabbed my car keys from under the counter and said bye to Dez. I walked outside to my beautiful black mustang sitting in the front of the store.
God how I love this car, I had restored it from ground up. I unlocked the door and slid into my seat. As I pulled away from the curb I looked out my rear view mirror and saw a black BMW with tinted windows following close behind.
( Кровавое прошлое means Bloody past)
After driving for about ten minutes, we came to the fork in the road, on leads to thedevelopment that I lived in and the other went to Kpobaboe Npownoe Mansion.
I pulled my car to the side of the road and got out, he did the same behind me. I lend against my car and waited for him to walk over.
"Hey, so if you follow the road on the left for a few miles you will come straight to Kpobaboe Npownoe." I pushed off my car and as I was opening my door he said
"Thanks for the directions Alura." Um how the heck does he know my name?!
I turned to look at him and said "How do you know my name?"wow my choice of words are amazing.
"Well for one thing the girl at the store said it quite a few times and for another your still wearing your name tag."
I swear I must have turned several shades of red. Smirking from his job well done at making me the most embarrassed person in the world he walked back to his car and began opening the door.
"Hey since you know my name whats yours?" I called after him ,holding on to my last shred of dignity, he didn't even turn back as he said
"Its better if you didn't know."then he got in his car and drove away. God that was really mean, he was a total meanie pants! OK now I sound like a five year old. I shock my head slightly and drove home.
A few minutes later I pulled up to your typical two story suburban house. I pulled into the drive way and parked, Crap were did I put my house keys. Sighing loudly I got out of my car walking to the front door all the while praying for some miracle that my mom or my step dad left the door unlocked.
I turned the door and my last shred of hoped disappeared, well maybe not. Lucky for me I might remember the number for the garage, walking over the keypad I typed in the first four digit number that popped into my head. Once again lucky for me it worked, I walked straight upstairs and to my room. Sitting on my bed like usually was my cat Risika she was a pretty grey color with the coolest eyes ever, she has one blue eye and one yellow.
As I petted her my I look around my room out of boredom. It was in my mind anyway the coolest room ever, the wall that my bed sat off of was paint a rich dark purple, while the rest of my walls were painted an off white. At the bottom of my bed sat an small old chest with a small sand zen garden sitting top of it and a purple dog made of yarn.
In one corner of my room sat a old fashioned long mirror on the wall , it had pictures of me and my friends on it and ticket from the concerts that I had been to, beside the mirror was a window with a great view of the woods behind my house. In another corner sat my large book case with every bookshelf filled side to side with books. The walls had a lot of different posters of my most favorite rock bands on it.
Out of nowhere my cell started to play the song Faggot by MSI. Sighing slightly I answered the phone
"Hey" tiredly I got up and walked down stairs to my kitchen and opened the fridge.
"OMG!!! So what happened with hot directions dude?!" Destiny assaulted my ears with her unyielding squawks of the unneeded sort. I grab a can of Pepsi and walked out onto the deck from the sliding doors in my kitchen.
Rolling my eyes slightly I sat on one of the built in benches and began torecounted what had happened between me and the guy.
"Wow that's so cool how he was soooo mysterious about his name!!! But did you seriously need to be so slow about how he would know your name"
"No he was really annoying at the fact that he didn't give me his name, really he got on my freaking nerves I swear. And sorry I've been up since six this morning and I'm severely tired so bite me bitch." I recanted as i popped open my soda and took a sip.
"Well blah to you too! Anyway Awww!!! You know you liked him, plus since we don't know his real name why don't we come up with something to call him." Why oh why did I pick the weirdest friends.
"Fine why don't we call him BMW Dude, his car was really cool by the way even if he wasn't" I said while I watched a bunny rabbit run and slip through the trees.
"Great name! Next time you see him you should call him that!" I wonder if she was serious but thought better of asking, so didn't need her reprimanding me for it.
"Dez in all honesty I never want to see him again!"
Chapter 2
Beep. Beep. Beep. I tiredly rolled over and turned off my alarm clock. My movement seemed to have disturbed Risika, she gave me one of her kitty glares and bounded off the side of my bed.
I yawned and glanced at my alarm clock, the bright red numbers read 7:00am, and frankly I found that being up at this hour on summer vacation. But I needed to get ready for my volunteer work at the hospital. I got up and grabbed a pair of pin strip pants and a plain black blouse; I picked up my pink work vest and grabbed my black and white converse.
I walked downstairs and went to the kitchen; my mom was sitting at the island sipping coffee and reading the newspaper.
"Morning mom." I said as I walked over to the fridge and took out the coffee creamer.
" Morning Bella, so what are you doing today?" my mom asked as I poured myself a cup of coffee.
" Well I'm at the hospital from eight to twelve, then I'm going to meet Matt for lunch and then well I have no idea maybe shopping or something." I sat down across from her as I took a sip of my coffee it was like heaven
"Well don't get home to late, oh and guess who's coming home for awhile!"
"Umm¡ Santa Clause?" I said without too much enthusiasm.
"Very funny Alura, no not quite Santa." My mom's words had a undertone of sarcasms and she rolled her eyes.
"Well shucks I guess I can't be right every time. I'm guessing Ariel, so the protégée is coming home what a joyous occasion!" I walked over to the sink and placed my cup in.
"Hmm, well shouldn't you be heading off right about now?" My mom nodded towards the clock, which read 7:28.
"Crap! See you later mom!" I quickly ran out to my car and drove to the hospital. The day passed rather quickly and I only had half an hour left. Of course that's when Meg my team leader decided that she wanted me to run some papers to the lab.
As I was running to get the labs in I accidentally ran into someone and I dropped all the papers in the process. "I'm so sorry!" I quickly began to collect the papers the person who I bumped into grabbed some of the papers. I stood up to thank the person. Dear god fate is a bitch.
" Well hello Alura" Ugh! This was so not my day. It was BMW guy and he had a particularly annoying smirk on his face.
"Hello weird man who's name that I do not know." I replied back as I tried to put the papers back into some semblance of an order. As he was about to say something a small imp like girl popped out from behind him
" HIS NAME IS MIKHAIL!" The small girl practically yelled at me, I laughed lightly at her antics.
" Well if his name is Mikhail then what is your name?"
"It's Alisa! Mikhail is my older brother! So your name is Alura? That's a really pretty name! So what's your favorite color? How do you spell your name? How old are you? Do you have a boyfriend?" Alisa spoke very fast and all in one breathe, she seemed to be very hyper.
"Excuse me, Alura shouldn't you be getting those papers into the lab ¡mmediately?" Meg asked.
"Yes, I'm on my way now." Meg nodded her head and walked away. " Well bye Alisa and Mikhail." I rushed to the elevator and impatiently pressed the down button.
"Alura! Can I get your number." Alisa asked well more like demanded.
"Um sure." She quickly shoved her cell into my hands and asked for mine. As I put my number in her cell she put her number in mine. The elevator doors opened just as I finished and we traded cells back. " Well bye." I stepped into the elevator as the doors closed Alisa waved goodbye with a big smile on her face. I leaned against the back wall of the elevator and let out a sigh, I think I just made a big mistake.
( Mikhail is pronounced: mee-khah-EEL )
(Alisa is pronounced: ah-LEE-sah)
Chapter one
(Third person POV)
The sun glared off the hood of a 90' mustang that was sitting in front of Dave's Music Store. Inside sat a petite girl, she has light brown skin and her hair was dark brown and fell just a bit below her shoulders and had straight bangs that fell just above her eyes. She appeared to be 5'3 and was sitting behind the checkout counter boredly flipping through a random music magazine that sat in front of her.
From a door in the back of the store came a girl who seemed to be 5'2, extremely pale skin and had dark blond hair with rainbow stripes in it, which fell to about an inch above her shoulders.
"Yo, I cant find the box of new Cd's that just came in. Do you know where they are Alura?"The blond asked.
"Um, Yea I think that it is over near the back of the store Destiny." Alura made a vague hand motion towards the back of the store.
(Alura's POV)
When is this day going to end. I laid my head down on the counter and closed my eyes. I could hear the scuffling from Dez's little search behind me. After what seemed like hours I heard a bell jingle signaling that some had enter the store.
Thinking that like any other person they would just look around the aisle for awhile, boy was I was I wrong.
"Excuse me?" said a voice with a distinct Russian accent, it was definitely a males voice.
I slowly lifted my head up and saw the hottest guy I had ever seen....well not the hottest guy, no one could compete with Ryan Ross I'm totally love him. But anyways back to the hot guy in front of me. He looked to be about 6'1 to 6'3, dark black hair with even darker blue eyes, he had lightly tanned skin with what appeared to be a nicely toned out body beneath a black shirt.
"Hi! How can I help you?" rang Dez's voice behind me, thank god she said something or else I would be staring at him like a complete idiot.
"Yes, can you give me directions to Кровавое прошлое Mansion?"
"Sure! Hey Alura isn't that right by where you live, and what do you know your shift is up!" I immediately knew what Dez was up to.
Ever since we met in 6th grade she has been trying to set me up with almost every guy we meet.
I let out a sigh and said "Yea, it is, if you would like you could follow me in your car."
"Sure." I got up and grabbed my car keys from under the counter and said bye to Dez. I walked outside to my beautiful black mustang sitting in the front of the store.
God how I love this car, I had restored it from ground up. I unlocked the door and slid into my seat. As I pulled away from the curb I looked out my rear view mirror and saw a black BMW with tinted windows following close behind.
( Кровавое прошлое means Bloody past)
After driving for about ten minutes, we came to the fork in the road, on leads to thedevelopment that I lived in and the other went to Kpobaboe Npownoe Mansion.
I pulled my car to the side of the road and got out, he did the same behind me. I lend against my car and waited for him to walk over.
"Hey, so if you follow the road on the left for a few miles you will come straight to Kpobaboe Npownoe." I pushed off my car and as I was opening my door he said
"Thanks for the directions Alura." Um how the heck does he know my name?!
I turned to look at him and said "How do you know my name?"wow my choice of words are amazing.
"Well for one thing the girl at the store said it quite a few times and for another your still wearing your name tag."
I swear I must have turned several shades of red. Smirking from his job well done at making me the most embarrassed person in the world he walked back to his car and began opening the door.
"Hey since you know my name whats yours?" I called after him ,holding on to my last shred of dignity, he didn't even turn back as he said
"Its better if you didn't know."then he got in his car and drove away. God that was really mean, he was a total meanie pants! OK now I sound like a five year old. I shock my head slightly and drove home.
A few minutes later I pulled up to your typical two story suburban house. I pulled into the drive way and parked, Crap were did I put my house keys. Sighing loudly I got out of my car walking to the front door all the while praying for some miracle that my mom or my step dad left the door unlocked.
I turned the door and my last shred of hoped disappeared, well maybe not. Lucky for me I might remember the number for the garage, walking over the keypad I typed in the first four digit number that popped into my head. Once again lucky for me it worked, I walked straight upstairs and to my room. Sitting on my bed like usually was my cat Risika she was a pretty grey color with the coolest eyes ever, she has one blue eye and one yellow.
As I petted her my I look around my room out of boredom. It was in my mind anyway the coolest room ever, the wall that my bed sat off of was paint a rich dark purple, while the rest of my walls were painted an off white. At the bottom of my bed sat an small old chest with a small sand zen garden sitting top of it and a purple dog made of yarn.
In one corner of my room sat a old fashioned long mirror on the wall , it had pictures of me and my friends on it and ticket from the concerts that I had been to, beside the mirror was a window with a great view of the woods behind my house. In another corner sat my large book case with every bookshelf filled side to side with books. The walls had a lot of different posters of my most favorite rock bands on it.
Out of nowhere my cell started to play the song Faggot by MSI. Sighing slightly I answered the phone
"Hey" tiredly I got up and walked down stairs to my kitchen and opened the fridge.
"OMG!!! So what happened with hot directions dude?!" Destiny assaulted my ears with her unyielding squawks of the unneeded sort. I grab a can of Pepsi and walked out onto the deck from the sliding doors in my kitchen.
Rolling my eyes slightly I sat on one of the built in benches and began torecounted what had happened between me and the guy.
"Wow that's so cool how he was soooo mysterious about his name!!! But did you seriously need to be so slow about how he would know your name"
"No he was really annoying at the fact that he didn't give me his name, really he got on my freaking nerves I swear. And sorry I've been up since six this morning and I'm severely tired so bite me bitch." I recanted as i popped open my soda and took a sip.
"Well blah to you too! Anyway Awww!!! You know you liked him, plus since we don't know his real name why don't we come up with something to call him." Why oh why did I pick the weirdest friends.
"Fine why don't we call him BMW Dude, his car was really cool by the way even if he wasn't" I said while I watched a bunny rabbit run and slip through the trees.
"Great name! Next time you see him you should call him that!" I wonder if she was serious but thought better of asking, so didn't need her reprimanding me for it.
"Dez in all honesty I never want to see him again!"
Chapter 2
Beep. Beep. Beep. I tiredly rolled over and turned off my alarm clock. My movement seemed to have disturbed Risika, she gave me one of her kitty glares and bounded off the side of my bed.
I yawned and glanced at my alarm clock, the bright red numbers read 7:00am, and frankly I found that being up at this hour on summer vacation. But I needed to get ready for my volunteer work at the hospital. I got up and grabbed a pair of pin strip pants and a plain black blouse; I picked up my pink work vest and grabbed my black and white converse.
I walked downstairs and went to the kitchen; my mom was sitting at the island sipping coffee and reading the newspaper.
"Morning mom." I said as I walked over to the fridge and took out the coffee creamer.
" Morning Bella, so what are you doing today?" my mom asked as I poured myself a cup of coffee.
" Well I'm at the hospital from eight to twelve, then I'm going to meet Matt for lunch and then well I have no idea maybe shopping or something." I sat down across from her as I took a sip of my coffee it was like heaven
"Well don't get home to late, oh and guess who's coming home for awhile!"
"Umm¡ Santa Clause?" I said without too much enthusiasm.
"Very funny Alura, no not quite Santa." My mom's words had a undertone of sarcasms and she rolled her eyes.
"Well shucks I guess I can't be right every time. I'm guessing Ariel, so the protégée is coming home what a joyous occasion!" I walked over to the sink and placed my cup in.
"Hmm, well shouldn't you be heading off right about now?" My mom nodded towards the clock, which read 7:28.
"Crap! See you later mom!" I quickly ran out to my car and drove to the hospital. The day passed rather quickly and I only had half an hour left. Of course that's when Meg my team leader decided that she wanted me to run some papers to the lab.
As I was running to get the labs in I accidentally ran into someone and I dropped all the papers in the process. "I'm so sorry!" I quickly began to collect the papers the person who I bumped into grabbed some of the papers. I stood up to thank the person. Dear god fate is a bitch.
" Well hello Alura" Ugh! This was so not my day. It was BMW guy and he had a particularly annoying smirk on his face.
"Hello weird man who's name that I do not know." I replied back as I tried to put the papers back into some semblance of an order. As he was about to say something a small imp like girl popped out from behind him
" HIS NAME IS MIKHAIL!" The small girl practically yelled at me, I laughed lightly at her antics.
" Well if his name is Mikhail then what is your name?"
"It's Alisa! Mikhail is my older brother! So your name is Alura? That's a really pretty name! So what's your favorite color? How do you spell your name? How old are you? Do you have a boyfriend?" Alisa spoke very fast and all in one breathe, she seemed to be very hyper.
"Excuse me, Alura shouldn't you be getting those papers into the lab ¡mmediately?" Meg asked.
"Yes, I'm on my way now." Meg nodded her head and walked away. " Well bye Alisa and Mikhail." I rushed to the elevator and impatiently pressed the down button.
"Alura! Can I get your number." Alisa asked well more like demanded.
"Um sure." She quickly shoved her cell into my hands and asked for mine. As I put my number in her cell she put her number in mine. The elevator doors opened just as I finished and we traded cells back. " Well bye." I stepped into the elevator as the doors closed Alisa waved goodbye with a big smile on her face. I leaned against the back wall of the elevator and let out a sigh, I think I just made a big mistake.
( Mikhail is pronounced: mee-khah-EEL )
(Alisa is pronounced: ah-LEE-sah)