tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 11, 2009 20:53:34 GMT -5
Hey you guys I'm going to start posting my story on here starting tomorrow because being the idiot that I am I believe I left it my Mom's house. Feel free to comment on it and give me suggestions some of it will be different then others because I started it a couple years ago I plan on posting something new every other day. Please don't copy anything from my story because it really is original, or so I think. If you guys get an idea on what the story should be called please tell me and thank you. Peace and love Kayla
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 13, 2009 21:10:01 GMT -5
Hey you guys sorry I didn't post yesterday my sister restarted the computer in the middle of me typing and I still had to do my h/w before bed hehe. oh and this is based on a dream I had
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 13, 2009 21:50:10 GMT -5
Chapter one
I was at a park... no a school my best guess. Somehow I knew it was break of the second week of school. As I scanned the school yard I didn't see anyone I knew- wait, scratch that I saw my good friend Lex, but something was different about her, she had straiten hair and was wearing pajama pants and overall just had this snobby look about her. I don't know why I'm thinking this about her we've been friends since the 4th grade. She looked at me and seemed disgusted but, for some reason it didn't bother me as much as it should have, almost as if I was used to it or something. Than I just closed my eyes and thought one thing "Teleport"I hadn't realized that I had been smiling until I felt myself frown. I walked over to two women, whom I guess were teachers, and asked "What now?" They stopped talking and stared at me as if deep in thought. Finally after what seemed like an eternity the curly haired blond one looked at me and said "Do this," while she put her hand over a rock and it flew half way across the large field as if someone had chucked it. They watched as I attempted it, I put my hand over a rock and concentrated but no matter how hard I tried it wouldn't budge. "Hmph I thought as much!" The black haired teacher said as she turned back to continue her conversation. I tried again and again but the rock still wouldn't move finally I pulled my armed back and brought it forward as fast as I could and snapped my fingers as they went over the rock. The rock flew all the way across the field twice as fast as the teacher's had. The teachers stopped talking again with their mouths wide open. "Do that again," The nicer one instructed. I did it again except with more grace this time. "How did yo-" The snob started but was cut off by the bell. "Never mind off to class with you." she shooed me. I grinned and started off towards the classrooms skipping happily.
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 13, 2009 21:52:55 GMT -5
I know it was short and confusing but all will be explained next chapter and I know my writings not that good but remember I did start this when I was 11 so I don't mind criticize and my other chapters should be a lot longer but than again I am no great writer like Thesilentlullaby
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Post by silent.lullaby on May 18, 2009 13:26:47 GMT -5
I don't even want to look back at what I wrote when I was eleven. Surely it would be dreadful. As confusing as your peice is i'm still quite interested in what could happen next which is half the battle of writing, is keeping people interested.
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 18, 2009 20:37:15 GMT -5
yeah I got to admit when I was younger I came up with some crazy stuff and the next chapter is alot longer and will actually make sence
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Post by rain0is0me on May 19, 2009 16:02:00 GMT -5
;D I like it
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 19, 2009 18:48:21 GMT -5
Chapter two ;D
All of a sudden I was cold and soaking wet. “Chris I’m going to kill you!” I screamed as my foster brother ran out of my room laughing with me hot on his trail. In case you haven’t already figured it out, he poured water on me. Finally I caught him and pinned him to the ground then started tickling him. “Ella…stop…please…stop!” He pleaded in-between laughs. “Fine,” I said then started wrestling with him. This kept going until we bumped into the side table and Mom’s vase went tumbling down and broke. Chris and I looked at each other wide-eyed as we heard our Mom’s voice yelling- no, screeching from upstairs. “Ellen Louise, Christopher Jacob, what in the hell did you brake!” We winced our mother’s yelling voice always scared us. We hurried off the floor and booked it into the kitchen grabbing the broom and dustpan we rushed back to clean it up knowing that it was only a matter of time until she sent Dad down here to investigate. Luckily it was a cheap vase, unlike some of the other’s in our house. Then we went into the kitchen again so we could wait for our parents to come downstairs for breakfast. We sat down at the table and started serving ourselves up acting as innocent as we could. As I was waiting I was thinking about the strange dream I had last night. What could it possibly mean; I mean it must mean something. “You had the dream again last night didn’t you?” Chris asked noticing that I was out of it. “Yeah, I did. It’s weird I’ve been having this dream all summer.” I reminded him. He nodded “You’re just nervous. I mean I am too it’s our first year at high school as soon as summer’s over it’s totally normal.” I smirked at the mention of school. “So are we going to do the same routine this year or spice it up?” “I don’t know don’t you think that it’s getting pretty old pretending to be twins? I mean they already know that we aren’t.” “Yeah but theirs kids coming from the other schools as well not just ours.” I reminded him. “But most of those schools we’ve gone to, and may I note, because of you.” “Yeah, but some of those schools we went to so long ago I don’t think they would remember us… wait, dang your right they probably would.” I said as I noticed his ‘are you kidding me’ stare. “Plus as we grow older our appearances get farther and farther apart you know we don’t look anything alike.” I thought about this one. Chris had shot blond curly hair, was short about 5’2, had dark brown eyes, and was super tan. Now I on the other hand had long strait black hair, was pretty tall about 5’5, had ocean blue eyes, and was pale as night. “Plus I’m older than you so I get the last say.” He added. I scowled I hated it whenever he brought up the fact that he was older then me, even though it was only by a few months. Our birthdays we’re on the day summer began June 21st and the day it ended August 22nd. “Any ways,” I said giving up. “Its not that I’m nervous…it’s just…I feel like something strange and unusable is going to happen this year.” I said unsurely. “What, that you’ll finally get a boyfriend?” he teased playfully. “No… that you’ll finally get a boyfriend.” I said back quickly with a strait face. “Hey, I’ve already got one!” He retorted not fully understanding what I said. I had burst out laughing not able to hold it in any longer. “What?” “I knew it!” I exclaimed, “I knew you were gay!” “What! I’m going to kill you!” He screamed as he finally figured it out. I screamed and hid behind our dad as he walked into the dining room. “What’s going on in here?” He asked amused. “Chris has turned gay and is trying to kill me!” I squealed and hid even farther behind Dad as Chris lunged for me again. “Chris stop trying to kill your sister.” He said sighing, “And what do you mean that he’s turned gay?” he asked me even more amused now. I explained to him our predicament in short form. “So let me get this strait? Ella, you said that Chris is gay and he agreed? So… Chris when are you going to bring your boyfriend home so we can meet him?” Our father teased giving me a high five. “Dad!” Chris whined as we laughed. “OK, OK Ella stop making fun of your brother and Chris… I got nothin’.” We laughed again. “High school’s going to be so different isn’t it?” I sighed leaning against the wall. “Yeah our lives are over just as it seems to begin.” Chris mimicked my gesture. “Gasp! Don’t say that Chris you will doom us all!” Dramatically I fell to the floor. “Like oh-my-Godrick Ella you’re-like-so-like-ugh-dumb-like-and-like-crazy-like.” Chris said like a prep. “Like oh-my-Godrick Chris don’t ever do that again or like ever use my word or I will like kill you in your sleep.” I said equally as preppy with a evil smile on my face. “Why can’t you guys be like normal siblings and fight over nothing?” Dad sighed. At this Chris and I looked at each other grinning. I went and sat down were Chris usually sits and he caught on. “Hey-that’s my seat!” he yelled. “Nuh uh, any ways you snooze you loose!” “Stop you guys are giving me a headache,” Mother groaned holding her head with a phone in her other hand. “Ella Daniel’s on the phone.” I jumped up and toke the phone out of her handing skipping up the stairs to my room. “Ello?” I asked. Let me fill you in, Daniel is my other best friend and has been almost as long as Lex. He’s practically the boy version of me, even in looks, though he is taller than me. “Hi Ella,” “Hey dude what’s up?” “Nothing much, I was just cleaning my room and I found our old scrapbook from 6th grade camp and summer camp under my bed and I wanted to come over.” “Oh my God! You were cleaning your room?” “Yeah yeah, so can I come over?” “Sure of course you can.” “Kay, be there in a minute.” Daniel also happen to live down the street, lucky me.
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 19, 2009 18:50:54 GMT -5
;D I like it Thank you very much, though it wasn't really developed yet.
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Post by rain0is0me on May 20, 2009 19:36:40 GMT -5
you are very welcome, and I really di like it! It gets more and more intresting!
-Keep writing!!
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 20, 2009 21:44:02 GMT -5
ya I guess it does I've over the years have written about 5 chapters on this I forgot all about it for a while and I had just refound it and decided to finally finish it I'm glad you actually like it I wasn't expecting anyone to.
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
Posts: 57
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 23, 2009 20:50:13 GMT -5
Hey I'm not going to be here for a while there's a couple of my friends birthdays, than our yearly trip to sunsplash (a water park), then all the eighth grader's go to the high school, and finally the last week of school, and my graduation, but I'll try to update more in the summer. I know I only have a little fans but no one has read this story before you guys and I really want to finish it and its easier for me if I know that there's even one person reading my story. Thanks a bunch, Kayla
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Post by silent.lullaby on May 24, 2009 0:47:27 GMT -5
Have a good time with your friends! <3
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on May 25, 2009 20:25:45 GMT -5
I did have fun, thank god for three day weekends I've living on sugar, and of course little sleep, since Friday and now I'm finally home but I need to do my homework soon anyways.
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tomboyzrock
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Life is over just as it seems to begin that is why we should live life to the fullest while we can.
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Post by tomboyzrock on Jun 3, 2009 21:33:27 GMT -5
I graduate tomorrow than Friday's the last day of school I'll be able to get on and actually work on my story during the summer
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